The Official Writing Challenge
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The use of the number 2 kind of threw me when I first started reading your story, but as I progressed I understood. I agree with your last phrase totally. We are Spiritual beings and if that is broken than many mental disorders. AMEN!
You have some great points. I did have a hard time reading your piece, though. There were some long sentences, if broken by a comma, might have been easier to read. I also was thrown by your 2 and little things like wonderful being two words. I'd hate to have people skip over your message because of these little things. You really have a sense of passion about what you are saying and I appreciate your sharing your ideas with me. Keep writing, only you can tell your story.
A very thoughtful piece with some very good points. You share your strong convictions well and challenge your readers.
I agree with you - we should never hide behind a mask. We should always be who we really are, and can only do that by letting the Holy Spirit control us. Thank you for the food for thought.
A thought provoking piece.