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vrey realistic...nice ending...leaves a sense of hope for your MC
Lovely, touching story. Thank God for parents that understand and build us up. Blessings.
Very realistic. A tiny note, lanky means tall and thin, so using three adjectives in the first sentence was redundant. Other than that, this was a good story that kept me interested and emphathizing with the girl throughout.
Not sure why the dad had to make his unkind comment, but glad mom was there loving at all moments for the girl.
Great writing! She could join our teenage group ILYNMW! It stands for what God stands for: I Love You No Matter What!