The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/08
I liked how you used the repetitive lines to add the depth of emotion needed in poems. I could feel it.
04/27/08
This one made me think. I liked it and liked the flow, but I must admit that I'm a little confused on who is speaking and who is the "you". Good writing, no doubt.
01/01/10
Hi, both this and your previous challenge article made me think and remember... Thanks.