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Love the POV here and the MC voice. Fun, light, sentimental, loving, and genuine. You have captured grandmotherhood so well. Your family is fortunate to have a grandmom like you.. thanks for sharing. Good writing...
Good writing, except I thought you were referring to your grandson as superman so the title doesn't quite make sense. Other than that good job.
Super Title for a mushy type story written by a "sane" grandmother who becomes a weakling at the sight of doe-eyed little ones. So cute, so well told, and an enjoyable romp through life from the eyes, ears and heart of a delightful grandmother.
Nicely done. Superman was no problem - It was Roy Rogers and Trigger that took second place... (*.*)!
I loved the humorous and lighthearted feel to this. What a superstar grandmother you are, and how fortunate your grandchildren are to have you. I think it's very commendable that you want them to grow up serving God, and that you are doing everything in your power to see that happen.

I really enjoyed this. It made me smile. Thank you for sharing. :)
Being a grandmother must be so wonderful! Thanks for sharing your insights with those of us who have a few years to go until we get the privilege too :)
Loved the humor and the use of the 1st. person POV. Well done. Honestly, I read this one because of the title, I almost past it by, but you led me in and made me smile. Thanks.
I loved the humor sprinkled throughout this. It was very enjoyable and it said a lot too. Good job.