The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/05
Wow! As a parent, our love is truly a reflection of God's love. The beautiful nurture of a mother towards her child is touchingly described in this poem. I can feel the yearning of the mother to have her child find his rest in his Savior! I love the progression from the womb through the different stages of childhood. Very powerful. Thanks for sharing! Blessings, Cheri
In my eyes, this is a masterpiece. God certainly shows His love through a devoted mother as she tenderly, repeatedly lays down her life for the child. And the conclusion, with the echoes of truth instilled since birth drawing the child back to the Father...awesome! I hope this wins. It is well worthy.
This is absolutely beautiful! I'm not much of a poetry buff, but this one takes my breath away! Love it!
05/19/05
Very nice piece! You have en excellent way with words! I'll send you a full critique via private message. :-)
05/29/05
"Dependent upon mercy," very true. We are all dependent upon it. Your love as a parent shines through. Your love of the Father is also shining.