The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a very touching story. You completely hit the topic. Assuming it is a true story, I'm very, very sorry for your loss. Well written story though.
08/04/07
A sweet story of memories, family and "what if's?" Nicely done, could use a little editing, but overall a nicely told story of yesteryear...
Your title was very creative; caught my attention right off and your story was nicely put together. A wonderful memory shared in a special way. Blessings!