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Topic: SEA CHANGE or TREE CHANGE (07/13/17)
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TITLE: Grandma and the Pine | Previous Challenge Entry
By JANET JONES
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The day grandpa planted it in their front yard.
She wasn’t grandma then, just Mama to my mama and grandpa’s better half.
That was the same year, same day, and grandma says, the same moment,
That she gave her heart to Jesus. Like a light switch, one minute faith was found only a
Memory of her childhood and the next, the radiance came through. gotta say
Jesus had to be the One Who flipped the switch.
My grandma walked planted in the light from that very moment.
Grandma and the pine grew through every season and stood.
Firm and tall they both pointed passionately
To Jesus. Our valley is prone to drought and they saw their fair share of the dry.
Deep, desert, dry that formed tight circles in the trunk of that tree
And tight lines on grandma’s face. The dryness drew designs on her, but joy did too, and
Her smile lines went deeper. Much deeper. Cuz her roots ran deep and wide, deep and so wide.
Jesus taught her to descend past the shallows.
And grandma drew from the sweet water of the sacred streams.
One day after three of rain and rain and then some more rain,
A strong storm sent that tree soaring past the house
And across the clothesline. The roots tried to hold onto soil as soft as grandma’s
Grits bubbling on the stove, but that soft soil couldn’t stabilize
Fifty feet worth of tree. It left a big hole in the yard, but not as big as the one
Grandma left when we put her in a pine box three years later. No not near as big.
But that woman left seeds of faith that have reached,
grown, stood pine tall, and left seeds for five generations now.
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Great message too!
Blessings~
You have used some strong word pictures in a short entry, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of your punchy style.
If you really want to know why we do that is because we are so involved with the writing.
Our heart and soul is in it so much that we want to hurry up and let others get a taste of our passion. I am the worst at that.
The comments given were great and the only thing I want to say is read a lot of other challenge entries, listen to the red ink comments, get all the instruction you can from the great partners at FaithWriters.
God bless and you will go far with your writing. Be patient.
It was nice. Keep using a for that seems to fit what you are writing.