The Official Writing Challenge
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08/12/16
Great story and love the unexpected twist at the end - good job!
A well written piece showing procrastination at it worse. There may be some readers who are torn up as it is a picture of a past incident in their lives.

It isn't always the "big things" that we should be concerned about though. Every time the Holy Spirit urges a person to do something and the person "procrastinates" an opportunity is wasted and possible gone.

Good writing. We need reminders.
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