The Official Writing Challenge
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03/19/15
A very unique approach and one in which will make the reader think.

God bless~
Pride often keeps us from obeying the voice of the Lord. You heard and obeyed. He rewarded with confirmation. Well done.
Creative take on the topic. Keep writing!
I liked this example of how God "nudges" us. Actually, I joke that I'm so hard-headed that he needs to throw bricks at me. When I obey, oh what wonderful things happen.

The only red ink id offer would be to tell me more. I was wondering what the conflict was and it would have been a great opener if you could have shared that. I think many people would be able to relate even more. With that said, I also understand why you may not have wanted to go into more details, you certainly wouldn't want to hurt anyone by telling more about the relationship. I can definitely tell you have a tender and caring heart. Your message is a great one, and definitely needs to be brought up in today's world of business. Nice job.