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09/20/14
A beautiful poem in all aspects.

God bless~
Periods at the end of each thought would have helped me keep the unit thoughts together.

Thank you for the total thought of the poem though.
Wonderful . . .

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1 Peter 3:15 - But sanctify the Lord God in your hearts: and [be] ready always to [give] an answer to every man that asketh you a reason of the hope that is in you with meekness and fear:

Hugs and prayers, Judi
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10/02/14
Good flow and follow-up. I would suggest it be longer but it contained the movement well to Christ. God bless.