The Official Writing Challenge
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This was very different! I liked the character of Simba-what a cat! Just a tip, a few more spaces

Make for easier reading! This was great, good job! ^_^
05/25/08
A bit diffcult to follow because of the lack of spacing but non the less a touching story. Makes me want to take in all the stray dogs in the neighbourhood.
Congratulations on taking 14th place in your level with this piece, Ken!