The Official Writing Challenge
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What a sweet, dear tribute to Grandma Marvel! This read like a song for me, I found myself humming along to the rhythm. My favorite verse was the last one-great job! ^_^
04/10/08
What a "Marvel"ous tribute to your grandmother!

Your poems will flow better if you pay closer attention to the meter of each stanza.

This was very visual, and I enjoyed reading it.
04/11/08
This is a wonderful tribute to your grandma! Very nice poem.
Laury
I greatly admire people who can write good poetry, and this was a very good poem and tribute to your grandmother. Thank you for sharing!