The Official Writing Challenge
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12/16/17
I think you had many good points in your entry, but I thought it needed a better hook in the beginning.
I like this line: "It is a virtue that comes from the Spirit of God when our heart is open to him and accept his Spirit to dwell within our soul."

When we give ourselves in obedience to Jesus command and are baptized for the forgiveness of our sin we are given the gift of the Holy Spirit and he can work within us in His special ways. (Acts 2:38)

Good work in your comparison.