The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/16
Congrats on your 2nd place ranking in Level 1. Well done.
11/17/16
Congratulations, Jacky, on placing 2nd place in the Beginners category.

Interesting perspective of embarrassment of the thief on the cross.

My only suggestion would be to watch for run-on sentences. For example: He felt disgusting,[;] he knew he was disgusting.