The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/16
I really enjoyed this!
11/12/16
This had a great message!
This is a well written, well intended story.

The mark a Christian should have is, first, love in their heart and then love in their actions.

I did like how you put the story together.
11/17/16
Congratulations, Emmanuella, on winning 4th place in the Beginner category.

I found your MC very intriguing. I think using dialogue would have shown more than told about tribal customs.