The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/16
I really liked your ending.
Good content with good thoughts. The more we understand God's word, the more we understand God.

Keep looking at his word to explain life situations.
01/16/16
Good thoughts. I think you need to proofread more. There are a number of errors in punctuation, verbs, adverbs etc. For ex. in para. 4 it should be tugged, not tucked. In para. 7, see clearly. Your ideas are good. Just need to refine a bit.
01/16/16
Powerful message!

Thank you.

God bless~
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