The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/05
This is very tender and precious. With just a bit of work on meter, I'd love to see this in a seniors' publication.
12/10/05
Lovely. A small typo "went", instead of "when"...and the rhyme isn't too smooth in a couple of verses...but all in all a Beautiful Poem. I realy liked it - You did a great job with the subject of Spring...and one of the best I've read today. Kudos! and God Bless.