The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/15
Your meter and the word order had an intriguing lyrical quality. I was quite taken in by it. Your message is good. I love your title.
03/02/15
I'm not an expert in poetic
"meters" or anything else related to the correct terminology...so all I can comment is on my feelings from reading poetry overall, and this one moved me greatly.

Great message!

God bless~
03/03/15
Important message for all who let pride consume them.