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This thought-provoking story points out how we are often warned about our pride but fail to heed the warnings. It made me think about all the times in my life I let pride get in the way of my relationship with Christ and other people. I believe you switched tenses several times in this piece so you may want to have someone review the story first.
03/02/15
You brought the topic to the forefront by Biblical reference in an excellent and timely reminder and message that is pertinent all year around.

Well done!

God bless~