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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: End Times (02/27/14)
Revelation

People believe times are the last.
It’s true today and in the past.
We can read in Revelation
All about the tribulation.
This book is hard to understand.
God is the one who has it planned.
We have pre millennialism,
Post and a millennialism.
Some will argue what they believe.
Devil always wants to deceive.
Symbolism is what you’ll find.
It may not give you peace of mind.
Lampstands and bowls and candlesticks,
Just what is it each one predicts?
What’s the meaning of Babylon?
How will this war ever be won?
When we study Revelation,
We can come to this conclusion.
There is much we don’t understand.
In everything God holds our hand.
Faithful and patient we must be
Until our Lord we one day see.
So we should thank and praise Him now.
He’s in charge of what, when and how.
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Member Comments
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Date
Sarah Wipf
03/06/14
This is beautiful!! Great job...I enjoyed every bit of it!
C D Swanson 
03/07/14
Poetic and oh so lovely!

God bless~
Larry Whittington
03/08/14
This was easy to read. I would, though, put a blank line between every 4 lines.

The rhyming words were well chosen but did not seem forced.

Good conclusion.

Nice work.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 
03/11/14
I'm not always a huge poetry fan, but I did like this. It had a strong message. As humans we tend to worry, but like you point out so nicely, we are worrying about the wrong thing. If God thought we could handle knowing just when, he would have told us. You did a nice job. Check out Jan's Writing Basics on the message boards. She has great advice and answers each post personally. This week she is discussing endings and a few weeks ago, she did a bit on writing poems. You definitely nailed the topic and did a nice job. I look forward to reading more of your work.