The Official Writing Challenge
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This scene is not out of line with today's society. (Much to our disgrace.)

Curiosity is valuable when guided by wisdom.

You wrote in an interesting form. At times I looked for rhyming words or same length of units.

It is just an interesting form that is easy to read.
10/21/13
Wow - powerful and sobering close to your story. However, this is the way life can be which your entry clearly illustrates.

Certainly on topic.

God bless~
This piece definitely fits the topic. It's sad and tragic, but life is like that sometimes. You did a good job of telling such a heart wrenching story while maintaining the rhythm and rhyme. Good job.