The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/11
A very thought provoking story. I have encountered a similar situation in my life. I believe your conclusion is very true.

A couple of your sentences were run-ons, but they did not detract from the overall message.
05/18/11
Good job. Sometimes certain friends are only with us for a season. Thank you.