The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/11
I love the title. Interesting history lesson.

You used two great pieces of writing. Maybe next time you can encorporate a little more of your own words.
05/16/11
Your poetry is lovely and haunting. I think you could do a great job of incorporating the story into your poem, lengthening it, instead of adding an explanation at the end. I'm not a poetry expert by any means, but I think you have a talent that just needs to be polished. :)