The Official Writing Challenge
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02/10/11
Very imaginative! I loved this. You did a good job portraying their being "swept off their feet". Keep writing.
02/11/11
I enjooyed how you took the characters of the bible and brought them forth with a here and now experience. Good job.
02/12/11
clever story.I must say i liked the idea of Leah and Rebecca and Rachel and thought it might be from the story of Jacob and Laban. Cleverly told i did get a little confused between the different women and perhaps some more descriptive material would be helpful.
02/12/11
I'm glad how you told the Bible characters story in a more updated form.

Well done!
This is a thrilling story. I found myself holding my breath. I had a tiny hard time remembering which character was who, but all said you did an Outstanding job.

Congratulations for ranking 6th inlevel one!