The Official Writing Challenge
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wow! This is a great story. I felt the pain and fear as well as the relief once Jeremy realized God was there. You did a great job and the ending felt realistic.
02/08/11
What a wonderful story of God's work. Powerful.
02/10/11
Great story! Keep writing!
Congratulations for placing l3th in level one! You rock my friend!
Like always, you're heart to reach those who doubt, brilliantly shines through in your writing! There is a lot of writing for believers but not nearly enough for unbelievers...keep writing, growing and perfecting your special gift. As for your story, I couldn't wait to find out how it ended, which like another said, it was a great and plausible ending.:)