The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh I liked this one! What a wonderful message and especially the 'secret in a jar' I liked it. Another favorite of mine this week! Excellent job! ^_^
What a wonderful tribute! You draw your reader in with the title and the story does not disappoint. Love it, excellent job!
05/02/08
This one is really good! It's witty and very insightful. Thanks for the "inner beauty" tips.
What an intrigueing title and the story underneath was just as spellbinding. All your "girl" readers are sure to like this one. I'm going right now to treat myself to a facial and then I'll help myself to some nice herb tea - and then pray and tuck in bed early for a change. :) Thanks for a motivating article. Your mom is a very wise woman.
05/05/08
This was a treat to read. Well done, and now I want to find some Noxzema or something!
05/06/08
This was a very good article and I liked your subject and your title was great. If I were to give it a bit of red ink I would say you need to organize your thoughts a bit better. Some paragraphs just didn't flow as well as others. For example the line "Why in this world I did not mention this, I have no idea." really confused me as to the way it was placed. Overall the story line came through and it was an enjoyable read.