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Good story with interesting characters. It's really sad that some have ulterior motives and just can't love someone for the sake of loving them. Continued blessings on your writing!
I'm a sucker for dog stories and this one was special. Good message and well written.
This is a charming story, even with the sad ending. You really made Carry come to life.
Great title and tie in at the end. What a clever name for a true freind of man. Well done, keep up the good words.
Great twist on the "greedy relatives" theme. You're right--not too sweet!
Oh how sweet! ;) (Actually, just the right amount of sweetness; you've also got your "evil" characters, which off-sets the sweetness and makes a good balance.) I really enjoyed this story. And the dog's name is perfect! Good writing!
Auntie was in her right mind all the way to the end. Good story.
Even though Carry is the only one given a name, Auntie and her niece shine as well, for their sweet spirits and love toward one another and their little friend.
What a great read...I enjoyed it very much.
Oooh, those meanies! I'm glad that she passed her most 'valuable' treasures to her real treasure, a precious niece who admired and cared for her. I also loved the name of "Carry" cute and especially the explanation that came with it! Great job! ^_^
You have the knack for telling a good story. The characters and the underlying story line are great and real with just enough intrigue to keep the reader curious and reading on.
What a beautiful story. I hope you do well this week because you deserve it.
Wonderful story. Carry is an awesome dog, and the name really fits her and what she does very well.