The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/08
Oh my, what an aunt. Too bad she hasn't got a clue about her nephew's heart! It sounds as though the nephew's whole family will need his services at some point-they need to learn about the Lord. ( : Thanks for sharing this story.
Great characterization and unique way to display this character's "talents". :)

Writing suggestions: It helps my eyes to follow the writing if an extra space is left between paragraphs. Also, use of quotation marks would have helped me realize at the very beginning that this was a conversation.

Great story line. Good job.
This was a great method to tell this story. I loved the ironic shift from embarrassment to pride as her nephew appeared on television.
04/29/08
Love the conversation...great story!
Very clever story line and well told. Only use spaces between paragraphs, makes it easier to read. I loved it.