The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/07
Awesome title, completely in tune with the voice of this piece.

Careful of small errors like "thief's", which should be "thieves". The topic was a bit weak here...

...but your voice is loud and strong! Thanks!
10/21/07
Wow - powerful words on a powerful topic.
Very interesting format and excellent message.
Nicely done. Very good voice in your poem. Keep up the inspired writing. God Blesses your voice.