The Official Writing Challenge
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LOL.. I certainly agree with your assement. Marriage and men mixed is like a dangerous walk on the wildside.
06/02/07
Clever idea.

Be careful of overusing "quotation marks" as I have done here--they're not usually necessary.

Another approach to this creative concept would be to take your 6th and 7th paragraphs and expand them into their own adventure story, and show us how her adventures with her husband brought her closer to God. Put us right in the action with her.

I enjoyed the relationship between these two people very much.
I think she does enjoy them, deep down. Very nice.
A walk on the wild side - yep.
I agree God does love adventures - and adventurerers.
good job