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TITLE: The Garden Snail | Previous Challenge Entry
By Terrie Card
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using tools of syrupy slime.
Minutes went by as he slowly progressed
one meager inch at a time.
Carrying his house upon his back
his burden seemed heavy to bare.
How can I help this creature out?
How can I get him there?
Picking him up, oh how he clung
like a suction cup to a wall.
He struggled with me, to let him be.
"You can fly now, you don't have to crawl!"
"Here little fellow, I'll help you get home.
Your problem has captured my heart.
I see your dilemma, and I'm here to serve."
As I placed him nine yards from the start.
A pat on the back for my good deed today,
I excitedly hurried away.
Until a thought struck my brain like a rock,
"He wasn't going that way!"
"What have I done? It will take him three days
to get back to where he was found."
I rushed to the spot where I placed him before,
the snail was not on the ground.
I thought of others I've served before
full of the best intentions.
Has my help done nothing more
than impede others' progressions?
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using tools of syrupy slime."
Will stay with me for some time. Great job!