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by Ruth Patton
02/01/09
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Mind is screaming
Heart is dreaming
Mouth is silent

Hot water rushes down
Take my pain and let it drown

Wake me up from this nightmare
Take me from this life unfair

Innocence taken away
Too soon why can't it stay?

Dreaming of a better tomorrow
Hoping for refuge from this sorrow

Praying that God will intervene
Turn our heads from what we've seen

Show us that there is a light
Let us see His strength, His might

Thankful for a life so small
Changing lives around us all

Mind is screaming
Heart is dreaming
Mouth is silent.

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Joanne Sher

01 Feb 2009

Very powerful. The repetition is especially effective.

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