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Hearts Smile

by Ruth Patton
07/01/08
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My heart was in so much pain
Until I looked to you
I felt so sad and lonely
Until you helped me through

I heard your voice talking
You were calling my name

"Stay with me, follow me
I will take your pain
I am always with you
I am forever by your side
I will take your burdens
You no longer have to hide
Just grab hold of my hand
And I will guide your way
If you fall down, I'll pick you up
And comfort you each day
It is a long road to walk
But I will lead you on
I'll be with you every step you take
And I will never be gone"

I thank you Lord for waiting
Though it took me a while
To realize what I needed
To make my heart truly smile

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Anita York
07 Jul 2008
I really like this poem. The structure is good. I myself am a "meter and rhyme" poet, and I appreciate it when those who try to write in rhyme are correct in their meter as well. This poem handles both very well. Then, as to actual content (what the poem is actually saying) I love the message in this poem. It reflects the fact that, as humans, we sometimes don't learn our lessons immediately, but God, bless His name, is patient and loving and willing to work with those who are really trying.
Judy Wilson
02 Jul 2008
This is so beautiful and true! Sometimes it makes you wonder why we can't get it through our heads that He is really there for us.

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