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The moment had arrived all her dreams.. passion that kept the vision alive would be realized in a few hours. She could remember her Moma saying, “Mapoule che’rie, God has given you a bigger gift than I have. I need to study work very hard while you just listen and play. Inside your Spirit, God etched a priceless gift my child.. one day your gift will touch many and it’s beauty will caress their hearts!”
“Moma.. precious Moma” her heart spoke.. dear Jesus, “ why did she have to go home with you before this glorious day? Could she not have stayed until this moment when both our dreams came true! Precious Moma.. she spoke in a whisper, I am playing your favorite music. Oh Lord might she hear it please.. the Paganini all the passion Moma.. May I play as well as you, my precious Moma!”
A peace came over Brett, “Child your Moma and I are with you.. she will hear Spirit to Spirit this is our gift to you.” “Thank you Lord,” she softly whispered.
A tear rolled down her face.. the pain still in her heart so many years since Brett had lost all those that were dear to her in that fatal accident. “ I never got to say good by, never able to snuggle and feel her embrace, nor hear her gentle voice again. I was just a little girl, my Lord, Oh! Just to see the love in her eyes once more, Father I still hurt,” she cried.
Once again, she was filled with peace! Excitement filled the atmosphere, charged with electricity, like in a thunderstorm, her debut at Cargnegie Hall. Once more, she heard in her heart.. “We are here my child.. fear not I have open the windows of heaven we are one in the Spirit. This is my gift to your Moma as well. One day we shall all be together in my house where there are no more tears or pain. I will give you your heart’s desire, my Brett.. all is well!”
“Mademoiselle Dupree, the orchestra is getting ready, Maestro shall escort you to the platform in five minutes!”
“Thank you, sir”, she replied.
~*~
Excerpt from my Victorian Novelette
"A Moment in Time". This is only one
scene,half way through the book. I
wanted to see if it held people's
interest. Thank you for reading.
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Wow, you're a good writer. This part of your story sounds very poetic. The only problem I can see with that is some people may feel confused by a few things if the story is written like a poem... but I don't know. It could be more than fine that way too. I don't know very much about poetry so it's probably fine. Very touching and lovely. Great work.