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Shadow

by Janice Cartwright
01/30/08
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just lift the edge

if you would like

the shadow’s edge

grasp it gingerly

with the fingertips

slowly

lift and peek beneath

to see what lies under

another world perhaps-

or nothing at all

impossible you say

but not

if there is wonder

imagination

vision

for mystery and life

keep secrets

if no one ever tries

lifting shadows

for where there is shadow

reality

where substance

shadow

attests to what exists

good evidence

not to be denied


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Suellen Fry
31 Jan 2008
You write beautiful poetry!!! I like reading your poems!!! Be Blessed!
LINDA GERMAIN 
30 Jan 2008
Lots of food for thought,Janice. I like the lower case presentation and the invitation for the reader to plug in whatever fits for them. You have a very creative mind~ :0)
Judith Hope
30 Jan 2008
Hello Janice, great to see you braving new styles of poetry. The idea in this one is intriguing and original. The first few lines really engaging the listener/reader ... Great work!!!

You know I feel it important to offer a constructive thought ... so, perhaps I could say that, for me, I would like to see the main theme/images determined and some editing of unnecessary lines.

This would make a highly original poem ... more highly effective.

Blessings,


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