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The Miracle

by Anthony Bowman
06/15/07
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The sun slides home some Sunday,
the citronella smoking low -
quiet conversations cooling under an old
air conditioner, sputtering like a dying man.

Jack is in my lap and warm, like honey, seeping
into my hungry places.

He is trying to stuff his flannel blanket
into his mouth, so I take the other end
into mine and try to chew out the miracle
that the years have exhausted –

to taste again the smoke in my wine, the meat
of the north wind and sweet rain water –

to feel again the love of my woman’s smile, the heat
of her simple kiss –

see the spirits that shadow all things
and the things themselves as they are in themselves –

and smell the hearty fare of the banquet of God,
like the heaviness of honeysuckle –

hear the symphony of the stars
and the whispers between the waves.

But all too soon the night
(that mother of simple things)
has soothed my little man to sleep.

How quickly he (and we), once so deliciously
alive, now slip into our slit-eyed stupors.

But this night is rising in me. Silence
is whispering her secrets to me and I

am just beginning to wake.
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David (The Goliath Assassin)
14 Dec 2007
You're a shifter, buddy! I see you re-arranging things for effect, and let me say that it worked on me!

"to taste again
the smoke in my wine
the meat of the north wind and sweet rain water –"

Wine, meat and sweet. definitely go together, as do Smoke, North wind, and rain water. You'e jumbled them all up to get us to pay a bit more attention. Slick.

"to feel again the love of my woman’s smile, the heat
of her simple kiss –"

Yeah, I've been down that road before... hard to forget.
Lesley-Anne Evans
27 Sep 2007
You drew me with the very first line...then captured me with the second stanza. This is wonderfully written. I have read some secular 'new poets' lately, and they are, in my humble opinion, trying too hard... one has to squint one's brain to see the meaning... but you, your unique and creative word-smithing stops me long enough to consider things differently, pulls me into the story, and makes me smile and hunger for more like this.
And, thank you SO much for your very helpful critique of "Window". Blessings to you as you continue to write and Glorify the one who gave you this gift!!!

LA. Evans

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