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This is the House that Jesus Built!

by (Treava) Joyce Pool
09/27/06
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NOTE: This is my version of the old nursery rhyme 'The House that Jack Built.' If you're familiar with that nursery rhyme, then you know it is very long and very repetitive. So ...
If you so desire, feel free to skip down to the last stanza. You won't hurt my feelings. :)


This is the house that Jesus built!

This is the house that Jesus built!

This is the provision that lay in the house that Jesus built.

This is the greed that ate the provision
That lay in the house that Jesus built.

This is the assurance of the gift of grace
that convicted the greed that ate the provision
that lay in the house that Jesus built.

This is the thief with the crumpled horn
That stole the assurance of the gift of grace
That convicted the greed that ate the provision
That lay in the house that Jesus built.

This is the maiden all forlorn
That rebuked the thief with the crumpled horn
That stole the assurance of the gift of grace
That convicted the greed that ate the provision
That lay in the house that Jesus built.

This is the Savior all tattered and torn
That died instead of the maiden all forlorn
That rebuked the thief with the crumpled horn
That stole the assurance of the gift of grace
That convicted the greed that ate the provision
That lay in the house that Jesus built.

This is the Judge from whom The Son is born
That resurrected the Savior all tattered and torn
That died instead of the maiden all forlorn
That rebuked the thief with the crumpled horn
That stole the assurance of the gift of grace
That convicted the greed that ate the provision
That lay in the house that Jesus built.

This is the joy that comes in the morn
That knows the Judge from whom The Son is born
That resurrected the Savior all tattered and torn
That died instead of the maiden all forlorn
That rebuked the thief with the crumpled horn
That stole the assurance of the gift of grace
That convicted the greed that ate the provision
That lay in the house that Jesus built.

This is the faith with which souls are adorned
That carries the joy that comes in the morn
That knows the Judge from whom The Son is born
That resurrected the Savior all tattered and torn
That died instead of the maiden all forlorn
That rebuked the thief with the crumpled horn
That stole the assurance of the gift of grace
That convicted the greed that ate the provision
That lay in the house that Jesus built.

This is the jury that stirs up a storm
That tries the faith with which souls are adorned
That carries the joy that comes in the morn
That knows the Judge from whom the Son is born
That resurrected the Savior all tattered and torn
That died instead of the maiden all forlorn
That rebuked the thief with the crumpled horn
That stole the assurance of the gift of grace
That convicted the greed that ate the provision
That lay in the house that Jesus built.

This is the foundation that was laid and formed
That can’t be shaken by the jury that stirs up a storm
That tries the faith with which souls are adorned
That carries the joy that comes in the morn
That knows the Judge from whom the Son is born
That resurrected the Savior all tattered and torn
That died instead of the maiden all forlorn
That rebuked the thief with the crumpled horn
That stole the assurance of the gift of grace
That convicted the greed that ate the provision
That lay in the house that Jesus built.
© Joyce Pool
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Joyce Simoneaux
28 Sep 2006
You are such a gifted writer! God has given you such a creative gift, and it is demonstrated in this work.
Peggy Yengling
28 Sep 2006
BRAVO...EXCELLENT! You've blended your creative writing with your Biblical knowledge and your joyful faith... and you've come up with a treasure! It's brilliant! Love, Peggy
Sherry Hoffcastel 
28 Sep 2006
I agree, this should be hanging on a wall somewhere. Does your creativity know no limits? Excellent job, my friend.
Thomas Kittrell
27 Sep 2006
Joyce, I read the whole thing. If I wake up in my sleep saying "This is" I will blame you. Ha,ha. Seriously, it is wonderful, and very innovative. God bless.
Thomas
Mitzi Busby
27 Sep 2006
Deep! Profound. This needs to hang upon a wall somewhere.

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