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Reclaiming Eden

by Melanie Kerr 
04/28/06
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"I've done what I set out to do
His image in them marred.
They leave this paradise of His
With lives forever scarred"

The glorious snake with glinting scales
Slid sinuously on the ground
A crafty reptile, sleek and sly
He moved without a sound

"I've soiled His love for human kind
I've wrecked His precious plan
Can Eden ever be reclaimed?
Oh No! It never can!"

Then fluttered down a peaceful bird
A pure and gentle dove
"You foolish snake, you cannot see
You're wrong about His love"

"Before this world came into being
He saw this tragic day
And in His mind conceived a plan
To wash this sin away"

"The woman's seed will crush your head.
A promise, firm and true
He will reclaim the lives you stained
Despite all you can do."

"His love bars them from Eden's tree
This tree - the Tree of Life
To eat this fruit their lives would be
Unending, full of strife."

"Some day they will return with joy
And take their rightful place
And gaze on Him with wondrous love
And know His awesome grace"

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Anne Linington
08 Mar 2009
This is a great poetic telling of the Eden narrative; Myown effort "Demon Dare" in the Challenge shows Satan in his true light- I hope. It wasn't to everyone's taste: the Jury's out, but I enjoyed doing it.
Anne.
Jesus Puppy 
29 Apr 2006
Very well done. Brings a good view of the love God has for man, even when they were cast out... Good job Mel.
Linda Watson Owen
29 Apr 2006
Ooh, I like this one a lot! I especially like the use of 'slid sinuously' to describe the serpent...great use of alliteration. The 's' sound is perfect for the hiss of the snake, and of course the 'sin' in 'sinuously' is brilliant!! Love it!!
Pat Guy
29 Apr 2006
Wow Melanie! This is great! I loved it! I loved the insight about Satan being wrong about God's love.
James Koppen
28 Apr 2006
Very nicely done. I really enjoyed the piece. You provided a great picture of the Soundless Serpent, and the hope for our return.
One Thought:
"Before this world came into being
He saw this tragic day"
If you wrote "Before this world came to be" it seems to have better cadence.

I loved this work.
Jim

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