Book Navigation
  • Hire
    Writers
    Editors
  • Home
  • Read
    What's
    New
  • Join
    Faith
    Writers
  • Forum
  • My
    Account
    Login
  • Shop
    Save
    Support
  • Book
    Store
  • Learn
    About
    Jesus
Return to Content
  • Read Our Devotional
  • Opportunities to be Published
The Home for Christian Writers! Matthew 6:33

Short Stories

PLEASE ENCOURAGE AUTHOR BY COMMENTING
  Leave Comment   Message Writer
  Hire Writer
Report Article
  Track Writer
  Add to Favorites
Nobody Asked

by Pat Guy 
09/26/05
Free to Share
Author requests article critique

  Message Writer Mail
  Hire Writer

Tweet

Eighteen month old Shelly crawls up onto her daddy’s lap and clings to his chest, but dad is preoccupied like most dad’s and absentmindedly puts one arm around her while he tries to read the paper. He barely notices her body relaxing until the paper crumples under her slight weight. Shelly dies for no apparent reason.

---

Labored breathing wakes George from his troubled sleep. He never sleeps for long. He can’t …. It comes back. Every moment, every emotion – relived – fresh as a new wound stabbed in the same spot over and over again.

He reaches for peace. He reaches for the solution to obliterate the memory of that night.

But this morning the bottle feels unfamiliar and peaks his curiosity. Squinting, he tries to focus through the haze of last night’s oblivion. He notices the wine label covered with white paper – taped. On it large, bold, black letters are written a message,

Let God take away your pain.
He helped me. Shelly is ok.
Love, Terry
1-301-555-1212 (call collect)


“Shelly – ok?” he mumbles in slurred confusion.

Shocked out of his protective fog, George reads the message again and again. How did Terry find me? What does she mean?

Looking away, he remembers the other furtive messages left by his unclean body – “God loves you,” “Repent,” “You must be born again.” No one ever asked him how he felt inside – just as well – he’d rather hide his shame…… he should have known ….. something was wrong…….with his baby princess.

Hugging the large bottle of cheap wine with its message of new hope, George staggers to his feet and checks his pockets for change. It’s been a long time since his day has started with direction and purpose.


Pat Guy
© 2005


PLEASE ENCOURAGE AUTHOR BELOW LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
Reader Count & Comments
Date
Suzanne R
07 Oct 2005
That is SO sad ... SO touching. So tell me - who is Terry? His 'unclean body'? His wife (or ex-wife)?

I could just see it happening......

Beautifully written.

The opinions expressed by authors do not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com. This is especially true with articles that deal with personal healthcare and prophecy. We encourage the reader to make their own decision in consultation with God, His Word, and others as needed.

This article has been read 1702 times    < Previous | Next >
Read more articles by Pat Guy or search for other articles by topic below.
Search for articles on: (e.g. creation; holiness etc.)
Read more by clicking on a link:
Free Reprints
Main Site Articles
Most Read Articles
Highly Acclaimed Challenge Articles.
New Release Christian Books for Free for a Simple Review.

God is Not Against You - He Came on an All Out Rescue Mission to Save You


...in Christ God was reconciling the world to himself, not counting their trespasses against them... 2 Cor 5:19

Therefore, my friends, I want you to know that through Jesus the forgiveness of sins is proclaimed to you. Acts 13:38

LEARN & TRUST JESUS HERE

FaithWriters offers Christian reading material for Christian readers. We offer Christian articles, Christian fiction, Christian non-fiction, Christian Bible studies, Christian poems, Christian articles for sale, free use Christian articles, Christian living articles, New Covenant Christian Bible Studies, Christian magazine articles and new Christian articles. We write for Jesus about God, the Bible, salvation, prayer and the word of God.




Home  |   My Account  |   What's New  |   Site Map  |   Contact Us  |   Help  |   Blog
Monthly Newsletter  |   SITE INFO  |   Link To Us  |   Become A Member  |   Sponsors  |   ADVERTISING