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Not Forsaken

by Honey Stone
03/05/05
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I watched as he decomposed
the red ring defining his eye sockets
the gray triangle from the top of his nose to his lips
his hair like a wet feather
his bulby nose turned sharp, clinging close to its undercartilege
his spotted, cracked lips
his face turned to a skull

This is what Mary must've seen
Mostly hopeful yet
sickend by the gasps
and toxins mixing in the body

But she didn't see what I saw
She waited three days
I, one hour

I saw his eyes turn to face death
Followed by a smile one hour later

Replaying my dad's last breath
I wonder if he asked
"Why have you forsaken me?"

But the setting of his lips into
a Mona Lisa smile sent the message
I'm alive.

I sleep more soundly
after watching death
turn to life

H. Stone © 2005

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Mitzi Busby
13 Mar 2005
Pamela,
What a blessing, what a revelation. He was not forsake, nor are we. Blessings!
(Treava) Joyce Pool
09 Mar 2005
I offer up a praise of thanksgiving and joy to the Lord that He has been so gracious and kind as to allow you to see the beauty of passing on from death to life everlasting. How very fortunate you are. And yet, my heart aches for the multitudes to be comforted by the same knowledge. Thanks to people like you who are gifted to write so beautifully, the multitudes can know... even if it's just one at a time. May you be ever comforted. Love you
Nancy Hardy
05 Mar 2005
Words can not adequately articulate the impact this piece has had on me and will have on all who shall read not only the words, but the peaceful hope that has been woven among the sadness. Blessed, Nancy

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