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Invisible Towns

by Honey Stone
01/29/05
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Imagine a town called Ultraviolet
where knowledge is held up.
Where leaders and teachers
are considered a notch above.
Structure is revered.
Change requires discussion.
Everything has a word for itself
before it can function.
Feelings are feared,
distrusted and disrespected.
Anything odd is
highly suspected.

Imagine a town called Infra Red.
Where “it just opened up” is the explanation.
Where there aren't any levels
or labels for anyone’s station.
Sensing and feeling are
trusted ways to discern.
Watching is the only
way you can learn.
Anyone can start a song
or interrupt with a word.
Not many actions are
DISCERNED to be absurd.
But to ever study
from a book.
This is the knowledge
they did forsook.

Imagine living in one town
and then moving to the next
and trying to explain to the other
about the other one’s best.
But always butting up against.
This invisible thing called “prejudice”.

Imagine all the colors in between.
that could come out of a bridge from these two extremes.

H. Stone © 2005
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Deborah Porter 
03 Feb 2005
Pamela, this was an exceptionally good piece of creative writing and thinking. I agree with the comment someone made about those last two lines. It summed the balance up perfectly. Well done. Every Christian reading this would easily get the point, yet you made it in an imaginative and creative way. Very good work. With love, Deb
Deena Walls
29 Jan 2005
Pamela this is a very good poem and very craetive you have a beautiful way of exspressing yourself Keep Writing !
Jasti Victor
29 Jan 2005
A very nice and neatly written poem. keep it up. God bless you and may you write many moreof these touching poems.

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