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Walk Through the Garden

by lynn gipson 
06/20/12
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Matthew 11:28 -- “Come to me, all who are heavy laden, and I will give your rest.”



Walk Through the Garden


Put your weary soul at ease,
And walk through the garden with me.

With flowers of hope, peace, and tranquility,
Blooms of grace for miles to see.

We’ll stroll along the rows of your life,
Talk of your worries, troubles and strife.

I’ll catch if you should you stumble or fall.
Cry in my arms, I won’t mind at all.

Lilies of the Valley will calm your fears,
Sunlight through prisms will dry your tears.

Your sins will be as dust in the wind,
And new growth for you will begin.

Let my words come as comfort to you,
Lighten your burdens hearing my truth.

Redemption I’ll give you for any reason,
My mercy will last throughout every season.

My Father in heaven sent me today,
With this message of hope so you might be saved.

Sow just enough faith for an eternity,
And walk through the garden with me.

Love, Jesus


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Maria Crenshaw
21 Jun 2012
I like your poem, "Walk through the Garden." It has a good message and very good rhyming couplets with some proximate rhymes. Several good examples poetic devices are used like consonance, assonance and alliteration. Good simile in the line,"Your sins will be as dust in the wind." I especially like the lines,"Redemption I'll give you for any reason; my mercy will last throughout every season."
Blessings,
Maria
Jody Goode
20 Jun 2012
Truly words of living hope from one redeemed, introducing one to the the gentle Savior who is our Living Hope :)
Millicent Njue
20 Jun 2012
What a soothing piece! To think we just need to invite the saviour into our lives and find peace.

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