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Sparrow
by Holly Laux
05/05/05
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Soaring on the clouds so high,
I can see a sparrow there,
Gliding on the winds of God,
He flies without a care.

For God has promised he will keep,
His eyes upon those wings,
Even when the breeze is strong,
God hears each song he sings.

The sparrow is God's glory,
His perfect creation soars,
Above the lambs of Christ our Lord,
A symbol he stands for.

Keep your eyes turned toward the sky,
And when the sparrow nears,
Thank your God in Heaven,
For erasing all your fears.

If the sparrow could make sentences,
He'd make sure you knew,
God provides for everyone,
The words he speaks are true.

Above in silver lined clouds,
The sparrow spreads his wings,
Each and every day,
The grace of God he brings.

Copyright 2005 Holly R. Laux

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Sherry Castelluccio  08 May 2005
This is the second time I've read this poem and I feel like I'm flying with the sparrow. Your words are so gentle and caressing, very pleasing to the soul.
Karen O'Leary 06 May 2005
Nice. Inspirational. However, the imperfect rhyme in the stanza three took me out of the flow for a bit. Maybe it could be reworked. Thank you for sharing this poem. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Sharon McClean 05 May 2005
This brings such a sweet message Holly, I love it. Beautifully written! In His love, Sharon




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