The Official Writing Challenge
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06/11/26
I like how your poem reflects the sun's journey with the life of a Christian.
06/12/26
Loved your beautiful descriptions like "Leaving a trail of ribbons,
Pink and gold and lavender,
In a dark sky, lightening to blue brilliance."

May we shine the Lord's beauty in our lives like the sun!
I love these parallel thoughts. Blessings