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By Jack Taylor
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The streets smelled of gasoline, stale beer, wet pavement, and often her own fear rising metallic in the back of her throat. She lived inside the noise like a fish lived in water, not noticing how it pressed against her skin.
But life was changing. The rental above the bakery allowed her to hover over it all. Barefoot on the worn wooden floor, Dawn stretched as the morning light spilled through the lace curtains. The faintest cloud of flour escaped through the open window below, along with the warm yeasty aroma of something sweet being made new. She pressed against the cool glass and absorbed the stillness.
When a passerby looked up, she instinctively ducked out of sight. Even now, months after she had left the corner at Main and Second, her muscles tightened at sudden sounds and glances. Car doors slamming made her flinch. A man’s laughter on the sidewalk below sent her heart racing, pulse beating hard against her ribs. She wrapped arms around herself and breathed in slowly, the way Sophie taught her at the shelter. In. Hold. Out.
Sanctification, the chaplain called it. Cleansing, becoming holy, set apart, living in acceptance and grace. It was a long word that felt more like climbing a mountain. She’d laughed when she first heard it. She was used and common, far from eligible, and yet, he hadn’t looked at her like that. None of them had.
Images of the first night in the church basement flooded her mind. She’d gone for the coffee and warmth after an icy hour on the corner. Fluorescent lights buzzed, the smell of soup hung in the air. No suspicion, judgment, or snide remarks.
A young woman with bright eyes slid in beside her. “I’m Sophie,” she said.
Dawn nodded, unsure what to do with her kindness. There was no comment about her bruises, tattoos, or clothing choice. It was unnerving.
Moving to her apartment sink, she splashed cold water over her fingers. It ran clear. She touched her collarbone, tracing a faint scar from a night she tried to forget.
“You are not what you’ve done or what was done to you,” Sophie said. “You are who He is making you to be.”
The thought unsettled her. She’d been made and unmade so many times. Being shaped by love felt impossible.
Downstairs, the bakery bell tinkled. Voices murmured, low and friendly. The world was waking up, moving forward into a new day. She pulled on a clean, second-hand, soft blue blouse, like the sky. The fabric brushed her shoulders gently. No one would tug at it or tear it today. A glance in the mirror blurred into an old reflection with heavy makeup, dark-lined eyes, painted lips, and emptiness inside. Now, her face looked younger, frightened, still, but awake.
This sanctification was a journey, not a single prayer with instant transformation. It was mornings like this. Choosing not to answer an old number. Setting her steps toward the second row at church instead of the street corner. It was reading words too good to be true-about forgiveness, cleansing, transformation, new beginnings. Letting truth settle like seed in the soul.
Last Tuesday, she’d served beside Sophie in the same soup kitchen where she had found courage and life. Another young girl, mascara running like rivers down her cheeks, huddled with her, hands trembling, reaching for hope. As she knelt before another, something shifted inside. She was no longer the one being rescued, but the one who could now rescue.
Her hope was still fragile. She slipped on her shoes and stepped out, breathing in the scent of bread, wrapping itself around her like a blessing. She descended slowly, feeling the polished banister holding her steady.
The city outside was the same. Cars rumbled. People hurried. On the corner, another girl waited. Sanctification was no escape from the city. It was walking through it differently, feeling the pull of old shadows but choosing the light, allowing the past to become testimony instead of identity.
Scars remained, but they no longer served as permissions for others to add more, like trash on the streets. A child smiled as she passed, and for the first time, she smiled back. A new Dawn was coming.
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