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By Jack Taylor
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It was the way of faith. Something would take their place and remove their guilt. Isaac had reached the years of manhood now and must do his duty. Yahweh had a way to restore the relationship with him. He had shown the way and not hidden the path like other gods. A lamb would shed its blood. Life for life.
The hill rose endlessly, bending its back toward the heavens. Dust and wild thyme shared their own scent for the day. Those broad shoulders ahead of him had travelled the earth with a unique rhythm and perseverance. The man was strong, familiar, safe. There was a certain majesty with the gray mane, the worn tunic, and the fire-pot swinging from his hand, the coals wrapped carefully for whatever lay ahead.
The rough rope holding his bundle of wood bit into his neck, gnawed at his tunic, and left an itch and an ache that pushed him beyond discomfort. The servants who had left home with father and son were far behind them now, waiting for their return. It was clear that they’d come to sacrifice to whatever god sheltered on the mountain, but something was wrong.
“Father,” Isaac said. The word felt heavier than usual.
His father stopped, leaning on his staff. He turned slowly, his eyes dark, deep, unreadable. “Here I am, my son.”
Isaac swallowed, noting his own quick and shallow breathing. “We have the fire,” he said carefully, nodding toward the pot, “and the wood.” He shifted the load on his shoulders. “But where is the offering?”
For a moment, it was like his father had become part of the mountain. Still, unmoving. The wind stirred, ruffling his beard, whispering through the rocks. Had he asked the wrong question? Was his father so old that he had forgotten the purpose of this adventure?
The gray head nodded in affirmation, then, gently, steady as always, the words settled. “God will provide himself the lamb for the offering, my son.”
Surely, this was a mistake. What God offered themselves? The question swirled inside, the answer eluding him. Perhaps his father meant that God would provide the sacrifice somehow. That would be in line with what he’d always heard in the fields, in the tent, by the night fires, and by the morning wells.
The summit opened like a scroll before them. One moment they were climbing, the next they stood on a flat outcrop of stone, the land falling away on every side. The sky was closer, brighter, warmer. Birds circled below them, not above.
His father re-arranged a stack of stones, carefully, firmly, deliberately. There was no hurry, no trembling. When he was satisfied, his father took up the wood and placed it carefully on top. Then he turned.
“Father…” Isaac began, but the other words caught in his throat.
Something flickered in his father’s eyes. Grief? Determination? Resolve? “My son,” the old man spoke as his voice broke.
Understanding came slowly as his father gripped his arms and backed him toward the altar. A slow, suffocating weight tightened his chest. He struggled face down as a firm hand held him in place. Up until now, he had always trusted, obeyed, and walked in step wherever his father had led him. But what was this? He grit his teeth, waiting, knowing what was next. What kind of father would sacrifice his son?
“Why?” he whispered, straining to look beyond the blue sky all around. “Why?”
He felt the tear drop onto his neck. As Isaac turned his head, the glint of a raised knife above him penetrated the peaceful sky. His heart hammered against his ribs, loud as thunder. Isaac closed his eyes and whimpered, “why?”
Then a voice sounded strong, sharp, and urgent. “Abraham! Abraham!”
The knife clattered to the rocks and Isaac watched it shudder and still itself. A bleating sounded. A ram caught by its horns in a thicket nearby. Why hadn’t they noticed before?
The pressure on his back released, ropes were untied, and his father snatched up the knife and ran toward the ram. In moments, the substitute had given its life, the atonement was made. Yahweh had told his story.
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My favorite line: For a moment, it was like his father had become part of the mountain.