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By Corinne Smelker
07/23/25
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Sage sat on the weathered porch of her childhood home, looking out at the fields that were a patchwork of gold against a boundless sky. She turned her brother’s ring over in her hands, its plain silver band catching the light of the hot July sun. Jude had worn it every day before he left for the City of Angels, chasing dreams that twisted into a haze of drugs. His overdose a year ago left Sage with a guilt that clung like damp earth. She’d returned to this quiet place to repent, not in the pews of the town’s little church, but in the stillness of her heart, where she blamed herself for not pulling him back from the edge.

Her mother stepped out, the screen door creaking, a worn Bible tucked under her arm. She settled beside Sage, her presence as steady as the oak shading the porch. Sage touched the cross necklace her mother had given her years ago, a small anchor to a faith she’d drifted from but never fully let go. “You’re carrying too much, Sage,” her mother said, voice soft as the breeze. “Jude made his own choices. You couldn’t live his life for him.”

Sage’s grip tightened on the ring. She’d seen the signs: Jude’s late-night calls, his voice slurred, his wild talk of music deals and big plans that sounded more like delusions. Addiction had been a serpent, coiling around him, its venom subtle at first, then relentless. She’d dismissed it, told herself he was “going through a phase.” She’d laughed when he rambled, thinking he’d snap out of it. Now, each memory was a stone in her chest. “I should’ve gone to him,” she said, voice breaking. “I knew he was slipping, and I did nothing.”

Her mother opened the Bible, its pages soft from years of use, and read quietly: “Come to me, all you who are weary and burdened, and I will give you rest.” The verse, from Matthew, wasn’t a sermon, just a truth that settled into Sage’s bones. She thought of that serpent, drugs, sly and unyielding, stealing her brother’s laugh, his spark. She hadn’t fought it for him, hadn’t driven to the city when he stopped answering her texts. The guilt was a weight she’d carried for months, heavy as the humid air.

She looked out at the fields, where fireflies would soon flicker in the dusk. “I’m sorry, Jude,” she whispered, tears spilling. “I should’ve been there. I should’ve tried harder.” The words felt like a prayer, raw and unpolished, offered to her brother, to herself, to something bigger. Her mother reached for her hand, squeezing gently. “God hears you, Sage. Jude is at peace now. Let the guilt go. You don’t have to carry it forever.”

Sage exhaled, the confession loosening a knot she’d held too long. She slipped the ring into her pocket, its weight a reminder, but no longer a chain. The cross at her neck felt warm, a quiet tether to grace. The present moment stretched under the fading light, the fields alive with the hum of crickets. She wasn’t whole yet. Grief and guilt don’t vanish in a day, but she’d laid down a piece of her burden, trusting it to a mercy she was starting to believe in again.

She stood, brushing dust from her jeans, and walked to the edge of the porch. The stars were beginning to prick the sky, and for the first time in months, Sage felt a flicker of hope. She’d carry Jude’s memory, but not his mistakes. The serpent of addiction had taken him, but it wouldn’t take her, too. With her mother’s quiet faith beside her and the cross at her neck, she took a step forward, ready to heal.

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