The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/24
I thought the statement about “it only takes a single step” was especially poignant. And I liked leaving the reader with the promise that a new chapter can be written.
04/23/24
Excellent! Again you bring the Bible alive with your monologues. I hope it does well.
God's justice and mercy are on full display here. Justice in that the child of a sinful union perished, but mercy in that Bathsheba gave birth to one of the greatest kings of Israel. Good job revealing the inner thoughts of the struggle to remain a child of integrity in a world full of temptation. Congrats on your 2nd place win!
My bad - congrats on your Highly Commended!