The Official Writing Challenge
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05/07/23
A good message and story in poem. One small thing, the poem says three men were discussing the verse and the protagonist tells them “both of you” which would indicate two people.

Other than that I liked this poem. Good job.
05/08/23
Beautiful!

Blessings~
05/11/23
Congratulations! Well deserved.
05/11/23
Very inspiring, sweet and gentle touch of love and kindness. Very relatable. Thank you.

A very well-deserved EC win!

God bless you.