The Official Writing Challenge
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04/29/23
Cute!

But it took me while to figure out the headdress stuff. Perhaps having it in parenthesis would have been more effective.

I like the way you closed off with the rhyme.
04/30/23
Excellent as always. Your monologues are always spot on topic, easy to read, and very enjoyable. Nicely done.
04/30/23
Well done, written and delivered.

Enjoyed it!

Blessings~